Make Everything New Comments

Great life in this poem, Uriah. The exhilaration is palpable! I understand that rare feeling, and it's worth everything. I echo everything Hugh said. Esther : ]

Very beautiful, visual piece of work. I could literally see in my mind's eye everything you wrote about (I especially liked the dancing winos - lol) . Well done. S

wonderful work my friend! finally some optimistic thoughts :) Carry on! ! HBH

Uriah: This is a lovely, flowing poem. It moves incredibly well from strong image to strong image. It speaks not only to the mind but to the heart as well. It clearly comes from your heart and spirit. Be blessed in your continuing work! I look forward to reading more from you. Hugh

Another wonderful poem Uriah. Great work. Your images break my heart though. Sincerely, Mary

Excellent work Uriah. This has a great pace to it and seems longer than it actually is. The lines Until the sleeping winos/ On crumbling sidewalks/ Pick up my cue, are excellent. The imagery is second to none

Uriah...I'm drawn to the passion in this poem. Good work.

you seem to be on a good way. u.