Make Her Go Away Poem by Dee Daffodil

Make Her Go Away

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Mom! !
Make her go away-
She's botherin me again!

You want to play-
You say?

Ok...

But only for the day.

I don't commit.

-a poem by Dee Daffodil April 4,1992

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Preeti - is here! 23 July 2006

Wait...i didn't get it.. so i read it again..but what's the story behind it? Preets

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David Gerardino 03 June 2006

botherin, I LOVE WORDS LIKE THIS, IT BRINGS A HONESTY TO IT..

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Duncan Wyllie 10 May 2006

I feel the emotion and am left feeling that I need to know more, A great write, love duncan X

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Dan Tharp 06 May 2006

My mind goes in a couple of different directions as I read this one. I could take it literally, but the last two lines lead me to believe it is a metaphor. I picture a young woman still cloaked in childhood feelings and fears... unwilling to commit to a lover. Enlighten me please on this one, Dee. Thanks. dan

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