Dee Daffodil

Create The Illusion Of Calm - Poem by Dee Daffodil

A poem for someone who needs to hear this...

When life sends you chaos and destruction
Create the illusion of calm
Others depend on you
To get them through
The tough times
Show them
Guide them
Lead them
Release them from their fear
When life sends you turmoil and despair

And when life send you personal defeat
And anguish
Create the illusion of calm
Even when your spirit has been broken
And you feel cut in two
For others are watching you
And depend on you, to...
Show them
Guide them
Lead them

And in time...
God willing...
That illusion of calm
Will once again
Release you from the chains
That tightly bind you
Leaving your spirit free
Restore again the body and the soul
And render you whole again

February 12,2007

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  • (8/3/2008 7:13:00 AM)

    I liked this poem! (Report) Reply

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  • (3/16/2008 5:57:00 AM)

    I think that everyone needs to hear that,
    but, not calm as much,
    as the illusion of control in thier lives!
    ... Enuff fillosofee!

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  • (4/26/2007 11:50:00 AM)

    Gee, this is such an amazing poem! It weaves through it such truth...Amazing truths that we should always try to follow! This is one of those poems that I wish I wrote because of the message and the great way you displayed it!
    Thanx for sharing I will do my best to follow those guidelines just that much more today.10/10.
    Take care Dee...
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  • (2/20/2007 3:50:00 PM)

    Dee, this is officially one of my favorite 'words of wisdom' ever... In the midst of tough times, it's often beyond our reach, that calm. We need someone to remind us. Mind over matter - it works. So, if it's all right, I'm copying this to post on my mirror. And here's love to a wonderful soul: YOU! Esther : ] (Report) Reply

  • (2/20/2007 8:00:00 AM)

    I like this poem because it shows that whatever life throws at us, we have to deal with it and carry on. There is great strength in creating an illusion of calm, so much so that it becomes no longer an illusion, as the calmness will exist for real (if you get my philosophical drift :)) (Report) Reply

  • (2/19/2007 2:48:00 PM)

    Beautiful words Dee. This is one I'll come back to. Thanks for sharing. Justine. (Report) Reply

  • (2/18/2007 11:09:00 AM)

    Thank you for this.....Your poem and two good strong rum and cokes got me back from my ranting.......I am a lovable drinker....I only get mad when I don't drink.LOL (Report) Reply

  • (2/18/2007 3:48:00 AM)

    Could there be anyone who DOESN'T need to hear this? Well I know I do... quite apart from the sheer pleasure of reading such a flowing piece... so thank you. t x (Report) Reply

  • (2/16/2007 11:52:00 PM)

    Words of wisdom abound in this fine poem. I call it 'the magic if' a word coined by Stanislavski, the famous Russian actor and director. He used to say if you were playing a part which you found difficult, use your magic if. 'If' I was in this situation, 'what would I do'? If I was calm and controlled and at peace, what would it feel like? I've used it so many times in my life - and not always on the stage either. Thanks for penning this.

    love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxx
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  • (2/16/2007 5:27:00 PM)

    Can't argue with this advice. Others who are under pressure need to see it in the eyes of those who would help them - esp in your line of work - and it's a very fine thing to nourish the strength that actually allows to you feel it as well as look it. Solid writing from start to finish, and sound advice Dee. A very fine poem. xx jim (Report) Reply

  • (2/16/2007 7:33:00 AM)

    The calmest people or at least those who 'look' the calmest are the dead. I remember my Grandfather was cutting his lawn and fell over. When they picked him up he actually looked happy. (Report) Reply

  • Melvina Germain (2/16/2007 12:39:00 AM)

    Oh yes, what you send out you get back, excellent poem with a great message. Thankyou so much---Melvina--- (Report) Reply

  • (2/14/2007 2:10:00 AM)

    How true this piece of advice is, Dee. By creating an aura of calm, those around you will feel more secure and safe, and this feeds back to you. I hope the intended recipient takes heed........
    Well written, wording superb.

    Love, Fran xxx
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  • (2/13/2007 8:51:00 PM)

    Thank you for this poem, I really need the calm at this time.
    Your spirit is touching mine and I hope it brings the calm to others who need it out there.
    Wonderful and calming poem.
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  • (2/12/2007 6:09:00 PM)

    I got u and I am making lemonade....... (Report) Reply

  • (2/12/2007 11:52:00 AM)

    Wonderful advice and poem, and the illusion becomes reality................ (Report) Reply

  • (2/12/2007 7:34:00 AM)

    and how close the 'illusion of calm' is, to the reality of calm! Such is the power of the mind.
    Fine poem.
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  • (2/12/2007 6:41:00 AM)

    What wise words Dee, I hope the person whom this poem is aimed at takes heed and does indeed follow your advice. Good write. HG: -) xx (Report) Reply

  • (2/12/2007 5:38:00 AM)

    Beautifully said....I can relate to this poem completely...mark of a great poet...
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  • (2/12/2007 5:03:00 AM)

    Great message here Dee very positive and hopefully inspirational for those who need it. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, February 12, 2007

Poem Edited: Wednesday, January 12, 2011

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