~ Make Me Your Me ~ Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

Nice rhythm, smooth flow, a well penned piece.

Like informal dialogue noetically. Excellent lambent wordsmithing! Talented display Ten+++

This craft has evidence of strong play of words, wonderful!

a mature...poetry....i ever love....God bless....a 10 +++

very very cute! ! ! very well crafted and expressive short verses! ! !

a simple straight forward poem directly from the heart.. no twisted approach or philosophical yet conveys the feelings.. and thats what makes this poem a reader friendly poem... totally enjoyed reading it

Terrific write up…well metered very much updated trendy style Finish is jocund, ‘Make me your me/If so /I’ll say okey-dokey! ... The title is eloquent, silvery, ‘Make me your me 10++

Rhymed poetry…as commented by others Title is excellent. ‘Fill my tub /Effulgently spilling. ‘…Wonderful imagery tub? Bosom spilling Love… ‘Make me your me/If so /I’ll say okey-dokey! ’…fantastic finish enjoyed much 10++

a poem with rich and innovative idea..loved it

' Make me your me' Beautiful rhythm. Expressed well. Enjoyed reading it Thanks for sharing with me 10+