~ Ma Mama Ma Mama Ma Maaaa! ~ - Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

~ Ma Mama Ma Mama Ma Maaaa! ~
Ms. Nivedita
23 November 2010

Into ~ After reading several comments I humbly give backdropp of this poem.

In poetry much experimentation are going on and critiques are categorizing in various ways like Realism Surrealism Modernism Romanticism etc.

To be honest no poetry can be canopied under one canvas and there will be pits where other flavors fill up.

Here I’ve used Satire Rasa [please Google for meaning] in anxious canvas ~ niv

Is Poetry
Frame n’ fill
Fill n’ frame
Or both or none
Or myriad mosaic? [1]

Its dialectal dilemma
Info from you wanna ~
Frau Primadonna
Tehara Gitana
Prez. Obama
Obtuse Osama
Smut Casanova
Fiesta Flora n’ Fauna? [2]

Any foolproof
Pro forma? [3]

Proxima! [4]

Result: This page can’t be displayed. [5]

Marxian dialect
Is but emotional Watergate! [6]

Tote poetic Prana
Melt in marijuana
Dive with diva coma
Zero all punctuation n’ comma
Tweet from formless psychosoma
Ma Mama ~ Mama Ma
Ma Maaaa! [7]

No not I? [8]

Glossary with humility I’m giving what I tried to express:

[1] Frau [German] Woman.
[2] Tehara [Romany]: Young girl [Pre puberty].
[3] Gitana: Spanish female Gypsy.
[4] Prez: Short form of President.
[5] Casanova: An Italian adventurer who wrote vivid accounts of his sexual encounters [1725-1798].
[6] Ikebana: Japanese art of flower arrangement.
[7] Bema: Area around the altar of a church for the clergy and choir.
[8] Goma: A city in eastern Congo.
[9] Roma: Capital and largest city of Italy.
[10] Proxima: The nearest star to the sun; distance: 4.3 light years.
[11] Watergate: A political scandal involving abuse of power and bribery and obstruction of justice; led to the resignation of Richard Nixon in 1974.
[12] Tote: Carry with difficulty.
[13] Prana: Life force in Hindu teachings.
[14] Archiearticulation: First articulation.

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Comments about ~ Ma Mama Ma Mama Ma Maaaa! ~ by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

  • (1/16/2011 2:40:00 AM)

    Hey Niv If one reads between the lines-and opens up their mind-they will find -that the poem rhymes-and there is a message there every time..I found it different but good. Please read one of mine (Report) Reply

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  • Pranab K Chakraborty (12/12/2010 5:29:00 AM)

    Bah! Besh likhechhen. Teri kobijanam achha hoga.

    Bah - Well in Bengali
    Besh - Good in Bengali
    likhechhen - You have Bengali.
    Others are of Bengali-Hindi mixed language....a discourse.

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  • (12/8/2010 1:47:00 PM)

    Im sorry but I do not know what to think about this poem. It is very original but it just doesn't make any sense to me. (Report) Reply

  • Juan Olivarez (12/8/2010 8:06:00 AM)

    Niv I am sorrry but I guess I am not a very good poet and very obtuse, because I do not understand it at all. I am so sorry I wish I could. (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh Kavdia (12/4/2010 2:10:00 AM)

    It was like a most beautiful painting of my imagination. gr8. (Report) Reply

  • Lawrence Beck (12/2/2010 6:04:00 PM)

    Congratulations, your trolliing for comments seems to have paid off. Personally, I didn't like the poem. Sorry. (Report) Reply

  • (12/2/2010 12:24:00 PM)

    refreshingly original, and yes, poetry comes from the deepest recesses of the human is impossible to categorise, for the criteria would have to be as numerous, and as diverse....thank you for this great piece :) (Report) Reply

  • Louis Cecile (11/29/2010 7:40:00 AM)

    So much going on with this poem. I like the way you are challenging view points and also creating poetry in various forms. There is much to thinking about with each thought provoking. (Report) Reply

  • Manolo Del Toro (11/26/2010 6:28:00 PM)

    I am so sorry I must be very ignorant, but I do not understand it at all, and it does not seem like poetry. (Report) Reply

  • Rajaram Ramachandran (11/26/2010 4:59:00 AM)

    Sometime a mixture of strange words makes one beautiful poem like a bouquet of assorted flowers. (Report) Reply

  • C N Prem Kumar (11/24/2010 11:44:00 PM)

    Different style, different rhyme, different theme. A very different poem. (Report) Reply

  • (11/24/2010 8:03:00 PM)

    Niv: I have no idea what this poem is about, however, like Bert I beleive you enjoyed writing it, and I think I enjoyed in my attempt to read it. Good work, I think. (Report) Reply

  • (11/24/2010 8:03:00 PM)

    Niv: I have no idea what this poem is about, however, like Bert I beleive you enjoyed writing it, and I think I enjoyed in my attempt to read it. Good work, I think. (Report) Reply

  • (11/24/2010 3:49:00 AM)

    Another juxtapose of words from lots of lands put together in your own initiative style...more like a clever romp of modern art...can't help enjoying it putting the meanings together..10/10 regards (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, November 23, 2010

Poem Edited: Monday, December 20, 2010

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