Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 414,023 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Makes You Dead - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Makes you dead

Make sure
For future
Once you have suffered
That shall make you dead

For you, love is game
You feel no shame
For break up or failure
Again you are going to lure

Who knows it shall succeed?
With wrong feed
And you are readily jumping in fray
Love is no ground to play

What all you need is stability
With blessings from an almighty
That your life remains cool and calm
Causing no one any harm

Yes, you both are on extreme end
With no love or hate treed
But convenient to each other likes
That aspect is unfortunately striking

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Comments about Makes You Dead by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (12/10/2015 8:56:00 AM)


    Nicely written poem..What all you need is stability
    With blessings from an almighty
    That your life remains cool and calm
    Causing no one any harm
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/10/2015 8:33:00 AM)


    Yes, you both are on extreme end
    With no love or hate treed
    But convenient to each other likes
    That aspect is unfortunately striking
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, December 10, 2015



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