Making It Together Poem by Paul Sebastian

Making It Together



My heart took a joyful flight
Like a morning butterfly
You took me by your side
To climb the mountain high
To achieve your life aims
Face challenges that would come
Together success reward claim
Through sweat and tears we’d done!

27.06.2015

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 July 2015

Face challenges that would come Together success reward claim Through sweat and tears we’d done! ......through tears and sweat you have to face challenges together in order to get success, excellent narration and high speculation. Many thanks for sharing.

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Jaishree Nair 28 June 2015

You made it to success together. Well pieced. Thanks

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Soumita Sarkar 28 June 2015

you narrated the sweat and sweetness of staying together.............Thanks

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