Man Is Immortal Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Man Is Immortal

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He has taught us a sin that results in death
The devil laughed, thinking we shall be smashed
Long ago we were thrown on earth from the skies
Devil was happy we shall then be slashed


The sins were merely like electrons orbiting round
The nucleus had God as a neutron and protons
Neutralising my sins in reproductive love
In equal numbers to that of the electrons,


Throw me in the waves and test my instincts to survive,
Here I come back with love in your arms and I am alive.


(The uncountable sons and daughters prove that man is immortal)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Me Poet Yeps Poet 14 April 2019

I do assure myself your MAN ENCOMPASSES WOE OF A MAN WITHOUT BTH NO CHILD CAN BE BORN O GREAT POET AS MAN OR WOMAN maybe BE COMBINED AND IS NO SIN IT'S THE FIRST STEP TO BEGIN expansion of your Lord's domain till life for eternal on this earth does remain till then God may abstain and veiled remain behind the hymen between Earth (Human) and Life (eternal) far distant

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 12 April 2019

A clever write that only a great thinker can write. Poetry, .science and.spirituality.... A.wonderful and thought provoking poem. Yes, man is immortal because of love.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 12 April 2019

A typical title! A wonderful poem with scientific temper! Well penned sir.........................10

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