Meditation And The Power Of The Mind Poem by Max Reif

Meditation And The Power Of The Mind

Rating: 5.0


Three or four repetitions
of a mental picture
of the location

as I walk toward a building
from a parking lot,
and I'll remember, later,
where I've parked my car.

It's taking considerably
longer to remember
where I've parked
my soul.

Saturday, February 4, 2006
Topic(s) of this poem: car,meditation,remember
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gina Onyemaechi 04 February 2006

Simple but high-impact. Regards, Gina.

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Joy Vanderhelm 04 February 2006

Wow. What a splendid poem, especially on the uptake of the ending. Loved it.

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Carolynn Shaw 04 February 2006

Max, this is stunning! accurately stunning. I too wish I'd written this. Carolynn

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John Kay 04 February 2006

A quick slash and twist and it's over. Very, very good job. Wish I had written it.

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Alice Vedral Rivera 04 February 2006

Profound in its ingenuousness. avr

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***** ********* 04 February 2006

know the feeling too well Max. Great perceptive expression in your poem. Thanks for sharing. 10 from Tai

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