Three or four repetitions
of a mental picture
of the location
as I walk toward a building
from a parking lot,
and I'll remember, later,
where I've parked my car.
It's taking considerably
longer to remember
where I've parked
my soul.
Wow. What a splendid poem, especially on the uptake of the ending. Loved it.
Max, this is stunning! accurately stunning. I too wish I'd written this. Carolynn
A quick slash and twist and it's over. Very, very good job. Wish I had written it.
know the feeling too well Max. Great perceptive expression in your poem. Thanks for sharing. 10 from Tai
Simple but high-impact. Regards, Gina.