Melting Icicle Poem by Susan Lacovara

Melting Icicle

Rating: 5.0


Rising tides of temptation led you to her silver shore
Effervescent laughter fell from lips long remember
Beauty was a beacon she saw little of in her mirror
Only until you showed how she did shine
Unresolved threads tied you to a past you said was forgotten
Netting her heart was an uncourageous act
Dangling a future that was merely a melting icicle

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
12/07/18 What was held in ice could not survive the scorching summer sun... (For RWR: Should have stepped into my season, first, being further from your past) .
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ratnakar Mandlik 07 December 2018

The intensity of emotions flowing through the poem is simply touching. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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