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Melting Light

Rating: 5.0
I eye you
behind the nudes of the dying light!
The dark water is sucking the muted sky,
you breathe inside!
Canopy above
lost in sight!
I feel more azures
And the final notes you left unhooked...
Six a.m,
I could better mind,
the silence of the rustling silk;
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Friday, November 24, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: light
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COMMENTS
Dr Antony Theodore 24 March 2018
I eye you behind the nudes of the dying light! I could better mind, the silence of the rustling silk; yellow lights........ a very nice poem a poem of desire hidden in nice words.... tony
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Jazib Kamalvi 27 November 2017
A beautiful image fondling with all senses, Nilima. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks
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Nilima Deb 27 November 2017
thank you for your read! Sure I will go through. regards!
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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 November 2017
The silence of the rustling silk motivates yellow light is amazing. The dark water holds its reflection to turn light rays in to golden colour. An amazing and brilliant imagery is drawn here.10
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Nilima Deb 25 November 2017
thank you so much dear poet for your read and comments
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Gajanan Mishra 24 November 2017
yellow light lying in bed, good one
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Unnikrishnan E S 24 November 2017
(part 2) Images of the like, : : notes you left unhooked: : : : silence of the rustling silk; ; ; : : growing fade: : : are really exquisite, unique! ! A lovely, humble 100+++
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Unnikrishnan E S 24 November 2017
Hi Nilima, A very beautiful, metaphoric and poignant poem. Fantastic choice of vocabulary, conjugation of words- right from the name of the poem, Melting Light. Wow! ! ! The opening lines, : : I eye you : : behind the nudes of the dying light! : : conjure up a totally etherial image, a rarified atmosphere. : : The dark water is sucking the muted sky, : : you breathe inside! : : phrases like DARK WATER and MUTED SKY disturb the reader, perturb his conscience, haunt him.. Congrats...
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