Yearning Of A Lonely Road Poem by Nilima Deb

Yearning Of A Lonely Road

Rating: 5.0


The melody of the silent wind spoke
to the lonely road towards the twilight hour.
Cute footsteps of the moonbeam
thrilled the seashore besides the divine power.

Sweet giggle of the heartbeat of the waves
embroidered the fashion coat of all unstitched dreams
some are designers, some are ethnics
Like the road separated by sea and streams.

Its been a long time, nobody passed by this path!
Whenever the road glimpses a falling star,
By closing her grey eyes,
she yearns for her most awaiting dearest passenger....!

Yearning Of A Lonely Road
Saturday, July 9, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: emotions
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Subhas Chandra Chakra 02 December 2017

One of the most brilliantly written poem on this site, Loved these lines.. some are designers, some are ethnics Like the road separated by sea and streams. and.. Its been a long time, nobody passed by this path! 10++++ for this poem shared. Regards. Subhas

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nilima deb 03 December 2017

thank you so much for your great words dear poet. my regards!

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Unnikrishnan E S 08 December 2016

Very electrifying write... footsteps of the moonbeam and Sweet giggle of the heartbeat of the waves And a coat of all unstitched dreams...Very rich images, that have succeeded in gelling with the mood and construction of the poem. Loved reading.10..

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nilima deb 03 December 2017

happy to read such inspirational comments. Thank you so much dear poet.

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M Asim Nehal 13 August 2016

Outstanding poem....the opening lines itself took it to different level..10+++ The melody of the silent wind spoke to the lonely road towards the twilight hour.

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nilima deb 03 December 2017

thank you so much dear poet for your liking and comments.

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Dev Anand 11 July 2016

The melody of the silent wind spoke to the lonely road towards the twilight hour..... from the very beginning of this poem till the end, this is a wonderful poem. you are really talented dear poetess.... write....... i know we are all waiting for the dearest passenger of the heart...........

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Nilima Deb 23 March 2017

thank you so much for your rich review. true touch.

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Nilima Deb 12 July 2016

Thank you dear poet for your complements and inspirational quote...yes, you are right absolutely.

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Kishore Kumar Das 10 July 2016

The lonely sea beach in the moonlit night with the roaring waves creates the flutter in your heart..that's why you yearn this lonely road......fantastic poem by you..

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