Meow, Meow Poem by Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Meow, Meow

Rating: 5.0


The Vanishing Act

The story started
a few months back.
After COVID had erupted
My daughter was allowed
‘working from home'
And came over
to live with us.

One damp evening
We had a little guest
Alone he came and said
‘meow" to my daughter,
Soon he became
The newest addition
To our little family.

"Brownie" we named him
Always scared of
Any moving object
He never ventured out
But reigned like a king
Within the four walls
Of our small but sumptuous house.

Our outer yard
And the garden full
of trees were home
To a large variety
Of birds and animals.

Sparrows, mynas and pigeons
A tiny little green bee eater
Cuckoos and woodpeckers
A squirrel family on the mango tree
A pair of dotted doves
Sat on the high palm tree
Exchanging their vows of love.

A spotted eagle flew at a height
With its eyes sharply focused
It's prey moving on the ground.
A lone black parakeet sang
melodiously on the mango tree.

Their songs, chirping and tweet
The squirrels' squeaks sweet
On the mango tree full of fragrant flowers
All made the mornings most melodious
Which even the cacophonous caws
Of the ravens did not disturb.

As the kitten grew up
all these started to vanish.
Except the ravens.
When did it all start and
when did it end
we didn't notice.

But, now the only sound
in and around the house
is 'meow, meow'.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
There is nothing more I can say at the moment.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr. M. Asim Nehal 28 April 2022

Cats are maternal aunt of the Big Cats. Their domestication won't kill their basic instincts. Nice poem.

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Hahaha! Are they! Nice poetic words, Dr Nehal. But, the second part of your observation is true. Cats do kill. But they are kind too. My daughter feeds het pet cat. Once he caught a pigeon for his food. He brought it to my daughter without even tasting it, in return to her feeding him regularly

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Dr Dillip K Swain 28 April 2022

Please read as: You are a matured poet. I feel your works and name will be remembered forever.

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Thank You, Dilipji. I am always grateful to you.

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I had posted replies to the comments by Geeta and RM Smith. But my posts have vanished without a trace. Will someone help me trace them out?

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 29 April 2022

A mysterious end to this interesting story and poem. Beautifully presented......10

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 29 April 2022

Such a nice true story. All happening your house after arrival of the Brownie. How did the birds and squirrels disappear? were they frightened of the cat!

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I have posted rejoinders to the posts of Dilipji, Rose Marie and Dr Nehal. But my posts vanished, I don't know where. If someone finds them, please direct them to this page 😀…

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 April 2022

A wonderful poem with great images. A vivid depiction and keen observation on the nature of cats.

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Thank You Rose Marie for the wonderful comments. You always try to delve deep into the poem before you make any comments. So I do always look forward to reading them.

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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