Metamorphosis Poem by Theodora (Theo) Onken
Metamorphosis
It was a caterpillar kind of morning
...Yet i could feel a change born in the air- -
Outside all the birds were feathering...
.....While strange clouds were weathering
And a "butterfly" of a day came out of no where!
The wind was sort of fluttering
...As if the days wings were going to fly- -
As if a true "chrysalis" moment upon verdant leaf was beginning
.....As if "Monarch's" were becoming the sky!
It was almost like "mother nature" had taken up painting...
...And had altered her canvas for this day...
As if she painted in the beauty of the "metamorphosis"
.....Of some of God's own "handy work" come out to play!
TheodoraOnken
November9,2017
Theo- - this is absolutely poetry at its highest.loved the way you - -] ll the birds were feathering... While strange clouds were weathering And a butterfly of a day came out of no where! - - -]that was so right the way you wrote these lines and gave us these images to play with in our imagination! ! ! 100000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000's 10s my dear poet!
This is so beautifully written, so gently poetic. A breath of great beauty in very troubled times.
Thank you dear Sandra for your always warm words! Hope you have a delightful weekend.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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9/22/2024 8:39:41 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Now to finish my comment- -] I must admit I've fallen in love with the middle stanza and its fluttering of a true chrysalis moment As if Monarch's were becoming the sky! - - - -] these lines cannot be praised high enough! ! ! AND HERE IT COMES- - the best closure ever: ! ! ! ! ! ! A thousand points would not be enough!
Susan, just read both of your comment's and i cannot tell you how truly wonderful you have made me feel.! ! ! ! ! Such praise, coming from such an intelligent, well versed, writer/poet such as you, just gives me ecstatic chill's - cannot ever remember a time in my life, when someone bestowed, such generous praise or review of my work! ! ! ! ! You are an utter delight- A Poet For All Season's, and my true friend for a gazillion reason's! ! ! ! ! Thank You, Sweet, One! ! ! !