I had gone to market
I brought a milk pack
Filling with nectar to feed
Children will drink wisdom
Soon to Get God let them
Learn true wisdom,
To shine with rays in sky.
© Kumarmani Mahakul,20 October 2015. All rights reserved.
A nice metaphor, Learn true wisdom, To shine with rays in sky.
picture of Chris G. Vaillancourt xGod is always good....nicely penned 20 Oct 2015 by Chris G. Vaillancourt | Reply picture of Fraga K-r xTrue wisdom is an ever fixed goal; thanks for sharing☺ 20 Oct 2015 by Fraga K-r | Reply picture of Keith Labonte xGreat deliverance, very artistically conjured. :) 20 Oct 2015 by Keith Labonte | Reply picture of Mehak Goel xBeautifully written... 20 Oct 2015 by Mehak Goel | Reply picture of Princess.. xNicely penned....... 20 Oct 2015 by Princess.. | Reply picture of Rohan ******* xbeautiful write dear Sir.. 21 Oct 2015 by Rohan ******* | Reply picture of Elizabeth Squires xFine verse my friend. Thanks for sharing. 23 Oct 2015 by Elizabeth Squires | Reply picture of Ramin Ara xNicely done dear Kumarmani. 23 Oct 2015 by Ramin Ara | Reply picture of Stella Armour xChildren are our future, we must nourish them.. 27 Oct 2015 by Stella Armour | Reply picture of Sylvia Frances Chan xBeautiful poem, sweetest metaphored, the only One Who can learn us wisdom is God. Most amazingly rendered with the all tribute to the Lord. Thank you so much. 28 Oct 2015 by Sylvia Frances Chan | Reply picture of Mizzy.. xChildren are tomorrow's world......good message within. 30 Oct 2015 by Mizzy.. | Reply picture of Sanja Šarić xArtistic piece, honest and simple, in one word: beautiful. 31 Oct 2015 by Sanja Šarić | Reply picture of Nishu Mathur xBeautiful and wise! , 31 Oct 2015 by Nishu Mathur | Reply picture of Shalini ~The solitary star xWell written. 1 Nov 2015 by Shalini ~The solitary star | Reply picture of Sneha SK xThis is beautiful. Thank you for sharing. 1 Nov 2015 by Sneha SK | Reply
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
How you write about milk packs that astonishes me. Leaf carries letter. Calmness is inside own mind. This we should feel. Soul is pure. Nature impacts on soul. This is a great poem and you are a nice poet.