Mirage And Oasis Poem by Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair

Mirage And Oasis

Rating: 4.8


How happy am I to meet you
Here in this desolate desert,
An oasis will be to me this spot;
I can wide open to you my heart
In total privacy and in silence.

I didn't feel at all any strain
To tread along the desert terrain
watching your footprints yonder:
Every mirage seemed to be thy footprint
That kindled hope to reach you soon.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Where there is love there we find no barriers
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 14 April 2020

Love has no barriers or boundaries. No difficulty or strain even to tread a desert terrain. Every mirage becomes a footprint kindling hope. Beautiful poem on love with amazing metaphors........10

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Thank you very much Geeta Menon. Love is such an irresistible emotion that can thrash any obstacle in its course and reach the goal. Special thanks for the comments in the metaphor

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Aniruddha Pathak 12 April 2020

Every mirage seemed to be thy footprint That kindled hope to reach you soon.... beautifully penned

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Thank you very much Pathakji.We have to take every adversity as an inspiration to our goal

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Revisiting this marvelous poem. Very inspiring.

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In love there is always oasis. Love does not recognize the state of bleak and dismal emptiness. A beautiful poem of love and hope.

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Thanking you more and more never reach the brim of satisfaction for such is your co-operation and appreciation

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 10 November 2021

A marvelous poem of love, hope and perseverance. Magnificently expressed and crafted. Liked the closure lines. Very inspiring. To my Poem List.

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Anjandev Roy 17 July 2021

Excellent piece

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Thank you very much Dr. Dillip. When we feel too much dependency on God all negative experiences will seem to be a path opened by Him to lead us to ensuing achievements

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