I've watched you grow up through the years.
I loved it when you came to visit all those years ago;
pulling funny faces, stretching your face in all directions to
make a face even sillier than the last.
Your face painted with vibrant pictures of stars and butterflies and the like.
You would laugh at me, and I would laugh back.
I loved it when you came to visit all those years ago.
Then one day you looked at me with your head held tall,
and a more serious countenance.
I loved the hours we spent together then. So many hours!
Although I missed how we used to giggle, I was now captivated
by your striking beauty.
Your youthful glow and taut skin were a wonder to behold.
You still painted your face, only no longer with pictures of unicorns and such,
but with shades of color that turned your eyes into mysterious, dark pools.
Your lips were painted like a rosy red apple or a bright orange peach that would
make anyone want to taste their firm, lush skin.
I loved the hours we spent together then. So many hours!
Now you look at me with such distaste.
You rarely come to visit now.
You still pull faces like you did when we were young.
Not to make me laugh, but to erase the lines that have bore into
your skin, creases left behind where you laughed or frowned.
You look so sad.
I wish you would paint your face again, or try to make me laugh,
but most of the time you ignore me.
Sometimes you walk by and give me a quick disapproving glance.
I try to get your attention, but your eyes quickly avert their attention
to anything but me.
I only want to tell you, "You are still beautiful, "
but you never come to visit now.
A fine start with a nice poem, Caroline. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks
Loved reading this pragmatic write! I quote a few fascinating lines of your poem. “Your youthful glow and taut skin were a wonder to behold/You still painted your face, only no longer with pictures of unicorns..Thanks for sharing. You may like to read my poem ‘Ode to My Conscience’. Thank you
Thank you for taking the time to read it :) I will look up your poem ‘Ode to My Conscience.’
This is a very emotional poem. It clear depiction of hour time changes things for man and leave us with longing and memories. I urge you to keep writing.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A very passionate piece of poetry nicely penned from the heart. Thanks for sharing Caroline.