Mirror Of Truth

Rating: 4.5
What is seen in the mirror is nothing more than a person with lies and hate.
With sadness and traits
of discrimination and disgrace.

What i see is a broken face of sadness.
With no hope to be filled with gladness.
More than ever can resent.
To have a heart been broken and bent.

What i see in the mirror is someone who's lost.
At the price of being cost.
With losing someone they love.
And being hurt so bad, it hurts to see them gone.

What i see is in the mirror.
Is me. The 'I am' and may have already became to be.
This is who i am and how part of my life is.
and unlike most for me this is the mirror of truth.
Sunday, November 1, 2009
That all makes so much sense. I relate so much to this poem, it's like I can look in my mirror and see others who are feeling the same way. I feel sorry, because I know that it times of feeling such pain, it's an excrutiating and trying experience. I hate it, and I would hate for anyone to have to go through it. But it makes an amazing poem.
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Allan O 06 November 2009
emotional..this writting shows more of you than did acid tears..it's more proclaimed and heart felt...it tells others of your emotional concerns...as for a mirror of truth i feel the mirror is simply a part of another person staring back at me...either saying this is it..or if you watch long enough..telling you this is not what i will simply become.... thanks Dee ~^..^
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Eyan Desir 04 November 2009
Sad but well expressed..good job
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Marieta Maglas 02 November 2009
nice philosophical poem....it is hard to find the mirror of truth.........10
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