When we are together
Constantly we fight
When we are apart
World seems depressed
Like a dark gloomy night......
Very nicely and aptly envisioned which deeply expresses the love between two. Many thanks for sharing.
World seems depressed Like a dark gloomy night.... wonderfully penned in true emotion,10
Relationships, apart from love, require mutual respect and understanding for each other. Moreover, we take things for granted. This brings turmoil in our otherwise peaceful life. Thanks a lot for sharing.
love and its feelings well portrayed in such small verses. thank you dear poetess.
A concise and poignant bit of verse, very heartfelt with strong emotions. A beautiful creation.
Love is an state of helplessness, when we have no alternate but to live together, it's love.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
O no, not I am aware of you or mine In time I live out of line Love goes away on the wave of saline at last - nothing I find have to live me out of mine greatly written 10++