Missing Runaway Found Comments

Utterly fantastic. A stunningly skilful piece. I'm a big fan of continuous rhyme and write a lot of it myself. Now DOUBLE continuous rhyme - that is something else. I love the structure of this compelling story. I'd take my hat off to you but I haven't got one! Ez

Oh yes...a smoking gun! ! ! Justice for victims of crime...a beautiful thought. Hugs, Dee

Unbelievable; so very good... As I read it, the words flowed in a funereal/dirge-like rhythm. High impact, this - I wish that I could say how much I respect this.

Another beautiful story, told in perfect rhyme. 10 from admiring Tai

what a tale! the heart whispers such sadness that tears fear to flow of a lost life never to smile in the sun but so well done here a surge of words with the end bittersweet and brutal a wonderful poem filled with compassion