Missing Runaway Found Poem by Chuck Audette

Missing Runaway Found

Rating: 5.0


cows lowing from knoll's grassy height
fields glowing in setting sun's light
leaves blowing in west wind's might
rain is owing, maybe comes tonight
crows crowing, and take to flight
weeds growing, this field's poor blight
old man's hoeing, bent and slight
from his hands throwing, in a sudden fright
oh ohing, never seen such a sight
it's my bones, showing, all gleamin and white
* * *
my hair then flowing, to much delight
to a new life going, but a wrong hitchhike
stranger bestowing lonely ride invite
my blood was flowing, but I put up a fight
then my body stowing, shallow grave at this site
years here slowing while the dirt held me tight
my folks woeing, never knew of my plight
soon to be knowing, why I never did write
now my soul can be going, they'll know I loved them alright
* * *
and the old man is toeing a cop's delight
killer's wallet
he lost that night

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Utterly fantastic. A stunningly skilful piece. I'm a big fan of continuous rhyme and write a lot of it myself. Now DOUBLE continuous rhyme - that is something else. I love the structure of this compelling story. I'd take my hat off to you but I haven't got one! Ez

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Dee Daffodil 03 May 2006

Oh yes...a smoking gun! ! ! Justice for victims of crime...a beautiful thought. Hugs, Dee

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Esther Leclerc 24 February 2006

Unbelievable; so very good... As I read it, the words flowed in a funereal/dirge-like rhythm. High impact, this - I wish that I could say how much I respect this.

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***** ********* 28 December 2005

Another beautiful story, told in perfect rhyme. 10 from admiring Tai

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Charles Chaim Wax 16 December 2005

what a tale! the heart whispers such sadness that tears fear to flow of a lost life never to smile in the sun but so well done here a surge of words with the end bittersweet and brutal a wonderful poem filled with compassion

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Chuck Audette

Chuck Audette

Poetry Hell, Vermont
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