Missing You Poem by jatin rout

Missing You

Rating: 4.9

It's getting late
and I can't sleep...
it's all your fault
for choosing me.
I like you so bad,
I don't know what to do
I'm spending all my time
missing you.
When were together
it's so hard to part,
I can't let go...
you stole my heart.
I lie awake...
picturing you in my head,
wondering if your thinking of me too, .. coz I'm always missing you.

Danny H 06 July 2009

This was a very short, sweet, an simple poem it expresses a lot of vidal thoughts you have your head always racing of the other one, in just a few short paragraphs 10+

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Ameera Aidrus 12 July 2009

U must be more deep...coz such feelings wil be noticed only when u remove ur heart in front of that person

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aww! ! that's sooo sweet. i hope u get ur gurl!

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Luo Zhihai 16 December 2014

picturing you in my head, Read the masterpiece! Greeting friends!

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Ekaterina M. Polischuk 05 March 2012

wonderful feelings... great heart poem)))) you are a true talent

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Vipins Puthooran 26 December 2011

I like this feeling of love! ! !

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Romeo Della Valle 27 June 2011

A very beautiful and sincere write! Well penned and poignant! We all go through that type of situation but for one reason or another we find the strength to move on and at the end find a true love, hopefully I was there many times and survived thank the Lord..! Keep it up! 10+++ If time permits, please read and enjoy my poems titled: A LOST LOVE and IN PURSUIT OF HAPPINESS, thanks in advance, Love and Peace for always! ...

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Nisha- Butterflydreams 29 April 2011

So sweet.. really like it.. shows how much you really miss 'Her'.. rated 10! :)

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