Mistake Poem by David Darbyshire

Mistake



Lee Wong was wrong
Blake made a mistake
Liu made a Boo-boo
Molly had her Folly

Confused? Dazed?
feeling stupid, lost
don't be crazed
not at any cost

To make a mistake
it is not the end of the world
To learn form your error
Will be quite an endeavor

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ernestine Northover 09 June 2006

If I'm not mistaken, this is a rather good read. Love Ernestine XXX

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Dee Daffodil 09 June 2006

Cute lil poem Dave...nice rhyme! Hugs, Dee

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Mia Ocean 09 June 2006

Nice poem. It has some good rhyming in it too. I like the beggining, its cute.

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Declan McHenry 09 June 2006

Tight piece Dave. You've developed your style.

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