Mo Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul


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Watching this wonderful universe
And comparing cosmic time period,
Human lifespan on Earth is nothing,
This is mo, of course mo we feel,
A person hardly lives sixty to eighty
Or in more ninety to hundred years,
But trillions of years pass here.

As compared to trillions in sense,
Hundred years of lifespan is nothing,
If we consider ten years just like a day,
Then we hardly live for eight to ten days.
Very rapidly time passes here we realize.

This is very wonderful but very true,
There are many scriptures and education,
For reading once at least a man needs,
Five hundreds of life span in his hands,
But lifespan is very short period of time,
Again time goes in childhood and school,
Time is spent in sleeping and eating,
In these ways many years are lost.

Many feel that life is very long for joy,
But this is very short for living we say.
We have to accept summary of every principle
And soon we have to proceed towards eternity,
Obeying command of God we have to learn art,
We shall surrender before God soon,
So that our saviour can lead our lives.

© Kumarmani Mahakul,11, July 2018. All rights reserved.

Wednesday, July 11, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: life,philosophical ,spiritual
Bernard F. Asuncion 12 July 2018

Such an excellent poem, Kumarmani...10+++++

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Efran Menny 06 October 2020

By God's grace having long journey is vey nice. You have interestingly expressed thought.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 17 July 2018

A profound piece of work on life brilliantly penned. The last stanza conveys an.affirmation faith. Loved the great wisdom embedded in this wonderful write.10 ++++

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Hans Vr 12 July 2018

I love the wisdom in this poem. The relativity of time and our life. Many are afraid of death, but if this body would be immortal, it would be not pure bliss. Excellent poem

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Dr Dillip K Swain 12 July 2018

As compared to trillions in sense, Hundred years of lifespan is nothing.....well said! A magnificent piece of work! (10)

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Edward Kofi Louis 12 July 2018

This wonderful Universe! ! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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