Listen to the rains,
strike the leaves..
Listen to the heart..
Listen to the breeze..
Feel the movements..
Flow deep..
And the sounds of life,
speak..
This is Poetry! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! The excellent use of brevity concentrated your readers' attention on this moment in time that you are presenting. I think this may very well be the best of the best that you have shared with us. IO am giviing it only one 10 because PH won't let me give you a gazillion! And I am putting this pretty gem on my fav list.
Goodness, Blushed My Dear! ! ! ! ! You Are Ever So Wonderful! ! ! ! ! Thank You Susan! ! ! ! ! Means Ever So Much! ! ! ! ! You Are, Wow! ! ! ! ! A Ever So Deeply Beautiful, Wonderful, And Moving, Poetess! ! ! ! ! Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! Many Smiles! ! ! ! !
Short but So lovely Listen to the movements in nature which speaks to us.. Wow
Thank You! ! ! Rini, For Such A Very Kind And Thoughtful Reply! ! ! ! ! I Look Forward To Visiting Your Page! ! ! ! ! Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! Many Smiles! ! ! ! !
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Beautiful. I appreciate your works because everywhere i find your keen poetic observation on people, places and natural scenery.