Sunday, July 28, 2024

Monsters Comments

Rating: 5.0

He hides underneath his Star Wars comforter
As he's frightened of the dark
He can't sleep because of the monsters
Under his bed
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LeeAnn Azzopardi
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Evelyn Judy Buehler 29 July 2024

The comforting presence of a caring babysitter, makes the monsters go away. A wonderful poem!

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Rebecca Navarre 29 July 2024

Magnificently written! .. And ever so heart felt! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 29 July 2024

Ever so heart touching! .. The fears of the night conjured up in a little boys mind! ..

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Richard Wlodarski 28 July 2024

LeeAnn, if 'play' isn't a typo, then your last line takes the poem a notch higher. Either way, the poem is great and a very enjoyable read!

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Richard Wlodarski 28 July 2024

The fear that all children have of monsters is so brilliantly, and wonderfully, expressed in this marvelous poem. Sometimes those monsters aren't the imaginary ones under the bed.

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Sandra Feldman 28 July 2024

Absolutely brilliant and impressive poem. Even some adults may feel like kids and monsters today! Great job. thanks!

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Anjandev Roy 28 July 2024

This is just brilliant...... thank u.... LeeAnn.....

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LeeAnn Azzopardi

LeeAnn Azzopardi

Detroit Mich
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