Moon And Sun Commission.. Poem by Varsha M

Moon And Sun Commission..

Rating: 5.0


O moon, o moon
Emperor of emotion
Poetic blossom
Heroic motion
Beauty lotion

As one dip in
Romanticism
Meant for twosome
Under the shade of sun
Bloom as fruit awesome

Dipped in sweetness of affection
Confirmed in shackles of lovism
Never to turn back ever again
As I ventured to finally win
The love we blossom

In hope of dispersion
Of love in precision
No other intention
Just me and you unison
Like moon and Sun commission.

Saturday, December 12, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: friendship,love,romance
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Inspired by poem of Suresh kumar Ek The moon. Just playing with words.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Suresh Kumar Ek 13 December 2020

Moon and Sun commissioned Played with fine words and feelings Poetic Blossom sweetness of affection Love in precision. Proud of you Varsha

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 12 December 2020

Thank you Varsha for all your beautiful comments on my poems. Stay blessed.... :)

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 12 December 2020

No other intention Just me and you unison Like moon and Sun commission. May friendship and love blossom like the beautiful full moon and the bright orange rays of the sun. Thank you Varsha for this lovely romantic poem.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 12 December 2020

An excellent composition with a fabulous title.. appreciated and admired.

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