Dr. Antony Theodore


Moon, Come And Bathe Me - Poem by Dr. Antony Theodore

Love flows with perfect grace
like the dove that wants to fly.

I remember her embrace.

Hold me my desire oh my heart!

Moon, come and bathe me,
caress me.

As the feathers of a wing
cuddle together,
I want to cuddle with you
and gaze at your face
with golden light
shining in my eyes.

Topic(s) of this poem: passion


Comments about Moon, Come And Bathe Me by Dr. Antony Theodore

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (9/8/2015 1:59:00 PM)


    There is a coma after Moon. please read it that way as an imperative.
    Moon, Come and bathe me.
    i thank you my Poet friends, who tell me about my mistakes and praise me for the poem. with a humble heart i accept all your criticism. God bless you all. tony
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  • David Wood (9/8/2015 5:15:00 AM)


    A very lovely and romantic poem, I love the use of language, good and descriptive, excellent work. A worthy 10 (Report) Reply

  • Roop Rekha Bhaskar (9/8/2015 3:39:00 AM)


    Moon come and bathe with me.... such a beautiful line. Love shows every thing including nature in a new light. Loved this.. (Report) Reply

  • (9/8/2015 3:07:00 AM)


    With golden light.... much fascinating and interesting poem too. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, September 8, 2015

Poem Edited: Tuesday, September 8, 2015


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