Love flows with perfect grace
like the dove that wants to fly.
I remember her embrace.
Hold me my desire oh my heart!
Moon, come and bathe me,
caress me.
As the feathers of a wing
cuddle together,
I want to cuddle with you
and gaze at your face
with golden light
shining in my eyes.
There is a coma after Moon. please read it that way as an imperative. Moon, Come and bathe me. i thank you my Poet friends, who tell me about my mistakes and praise me for the poem. with a humble heart i accept all your criticism. God bless you all. tony
A very lovely and romantic poem, I love the use of language, good and descriptive, excellent work. A worthy 10
Moon come and bathe with me.... such a beautiful line. Love shows every thing including nature in a new light. Loved this..
With golden light.... much fascinating and interesting poem too.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This is a beautiful poem on love with moon having touching expression and nice diction. I appreciate the way of presentation. Thank you dear Dr.tony. Full vote.