Kumarmani Mahakul

Gold Star - 146,452 Points (Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA)

Morning Train Is On Right Track - Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

From far dwelling light is visible
Train is rightly coming on track
Blowing horn train is giving alert
Station man is giving signal sure.

Many passengers are travelling
All are eager to reach destination
Early morning time train is giving
Fresh tune to have perception here.

Many are gossiping inside nicely
While new station is arriving
Few of them are going away sure
There is no chance of meeting again.

Very pleasant this train journey is
We gather and together gossip more
In own, own station we separate
We do never meet again in lifetime.

Topic(s) of this poem: journey, life


Comments about Morning Train Is On Right Track by Kumarmani Mahakul

  • (11/28/2015 11:27:00 AM)


    closely related to life..nice sir (Report) Reply

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  • Akhtar Jawad (11/27/2015 11:29:00 PM)


    An amazing metamorphic poem, beautiful. (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (11/27/2015 10:29:00 PM)


    literal or metaphorical, a nice write (Report) Reply

  • Shah Surja (11/27/2015 5:46:00 PM)


    Beautiful........
    poem (y)
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  • (11/27/2015 5:39:00 PM)


    Casual riders,
    Well described,
    Life in motion,
    Train does ride.

    Liked your very natural and well conceived train ride.
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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 27, 2015



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