Morning White Horse Poem by Tsira Gogeshvili

Morning White Horse

Rating: 5.0


If then there were moonless long nights...
And the silent horseman went, like same...
If then the horse, too, was more blackish
As homeless thoughts over sad- knight...

What the smallest birdie could do of a garden
She sang in the afternoon and night by ear her thin.
So, did light for a sympathetic the fan of red rose,
Look, morning has caught up, them, with white horse...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Yelena M. 25 August 2009

Symbolical and realistic at the same time..I love the imagery you build..very good write, thanks for sharing. Yelena M.

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Costa Anakiev 16 August 2009

Dear Tsira, it's really lovely. Well done. Konstantin. P.S. By the way, if you want to smile and be a bit disappointed, read 'Let me... (The end) '.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 15 August 2009

So, did light for a sympathetic the fan of red rose, Look, morning has caught up, them, with white horse..................wonderful imagery as curved over the light with color, sating the hearts galloping over white horse.ingenious write,10++, thanks for sharing

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Indira Renganathan 14 August 2009

You've crafted with excellent imagery...despair and hope...am I right Tsira...interesting

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Roland Bastien 13 August 2009

As homeless thoughts over sad- knight... ------------ I like the sound of it and the image too....

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Bert Bell 29 October 2010

Ah, Tsira, such a lovely and tender poem, rich in texture and imagery. Very sweet and well done.10++++

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Loved the imagination of this poem, Poetic language flowed beautifully! ; D

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Eyan Desir 03 January 2010

nice poetically write..........10

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Afzal Shauq 09 November 2009

What the smallest birdie could do of a garden She sang in the afternoon and night by ear her thin. So, did light for a sympathetic the fan of red rose, Look, morning has caught up, them, with white horse.. perfect way of writing and professionally expressed with symbolic way... really great work is this one.. sweet, rich and meaningful...liked it 10/10

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Obinna Eruchie 06 September 2009

Inspiring images you have penned in that lovely verse.

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