! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ***mortality Of Hope***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Dr subhendu kar

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ***mortality Of Hope***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Rating: 4.9


mystic quest awes as inspired tomorrow
myth redounds to wonder over desire
sweet breeze slowly baffles thirst
hope awakens own quantum universe

flower bloomed in the era of old
as of now by its grace of beauty too
is it not same flower by zest of aroma?
beauty of grace besmears with divinity

does today smack of tomorrow?
hope and despair twins of truancy
history yet never heaves eternity
just wind blows across passage of time

does innocence past reflects upon perpetuity?
just as right and wrong perpetrate by moments
when spectra dynamics resolve depth of silence
mist seemingly awaits redemption by sun rays

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
~ Jon London ~ 25 April 2009

Very well written piece, i like the way you went about this, wonderful penning

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Eyan Desir 23 April 2009

Complex Intelligent Writtin

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Maria Barbara Korynt 22 April 2009

Mystical searches, the evil and the good, the flower which is blooming and the grace which is enrapturing... the aftertaste of the tomorrow and a puff of wind... depths of a silence and the fog, probably waiting it paying through the sun's a rays... And what about hope? Until she is - an exit will always be, solution. It is an opened door of good solutions. If she will be missing - the door can never already open... What you think about, it Friend? Nice you are writing and such writing very much suits me. I am creating for oneself, for my own use, vision of what I read at you. I am supplementing her with facts which make my own story up. It is a versatility of your poem and writing, because other similarity - isn't possible. Very much it moved me and he brought up. I like it very much and thank you. (10v.) Maria Barbara Korynt

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Maitreyee Joshi 22 April 2009

many times in life hope is converted to dispair.yes, many of our hopes are mortal.but new ones still take birth.without hope we cant live.nice write.

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Miriam Maia Padua 21 April 2009

very fine thoughts in deep words.. makes my eyes misty..so touching. i am awed with your wonderful imagery... worthy to pause for awhile and think of life... a write flows with depth and great meaning heartfelt concern expressed in this piece... 10++++++++++

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 23 April 2010

‘…does today smack of tomorrow? /hope and despair twins of truancy…’ Indeed a Vedic concept where there is hope there is despair and vice versa Holy Gita teaches us to be dispassionate otherwise we’ll be dys-passionate = experience painful passion… May be in your subconscious Vedic [Gita too] vibes are bubbling for your Indian origin…and aptly appropriately reflected with thru exact poetic aperture. Voted 10 Ms. Nivedita UK PS May be concept of past present and future are highly relative in relation to Maha-Kala [Time Immemorial] niv

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Marieta Maglas 01 August 2009

The Role of Divine Grace in the Soteriology of Sankaracarya ''a philosopher of any merit has a committed view and is devoted to a coherent elaboration of a main thesis, which in Advaita is the ontological reality of Brahman alone. Epistemology or how one understands oneself in the lived world or even the status of the lived world itself are of secondary importance, not figuring seriously in the ultimate analysis. Having stated his thesis in the introduction to the Brahmasutra (BS) commentary, where he draws a distinction between reality and non-reality, Sankara expects us to apply that understanding of Advaita in his different works. Sankara builds his Advaita in his commentaries in keeping with the hermeneutical principles of ekavakyata (unity of meaning from beginning to end) and upakrama-parakrama nyaya, where the initial statements carry more weight than the later ones, in order to drive home his Advaita philosophy. He also gives ample proof of his grasp of the other darsanas (schools of Hindu thought) , and he often buttresses his arguments with arguments drawn from these schools. It is therefore not easy to read Sankara in a linear fashion.'' in this context the poem is excellent....10+++++ from me

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a deeply well penned poem...contemplation while searching for a lasting hope...the history is a place where we will never meet eternity...yesterday is a past way for today and today is yesterday for tomorrow...the dreams..the hopes can prolong our life beyond the end of life..immortality when we create some thing which carry our beating heart and thinking mind...few words which could last canbe an eternal hope for the dreamers and the seekers..10+++++

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Ramesh T A 26 April 2009

Mystical search for enlightenment proceeds in deep mystery like the mist waiting for dawn to clear itself the next day! Interesting poem for lovers of mysticism!

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~ Jon London ~ 25 April 2009

Very well written piece, i like the way you went about this, wonderful penning

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Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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