Mother Poem by Prakashsingh Rajput

Mother

Rating: 4.7


Oh! Mother for better care
And for dreams come true
I want the knowledge
Useful to my age
For which I pray to you.

Love and faith I want as a mate
The thoughts you gave
Which makes me great
Oh! Great mother no one cares
For which I say to you.

Joy of life and all my rights
No one should disturb me
No one in bind, make free all mind
To build one world all we
Oh! sweet mother, you so dear
For which I follow you.

Several castes, several religions
To bind them all love only reason
There are too problems
Life also has aims
For which I obey you.

There are the hurdles
There are the burdens
World is a big stage
It has some curtains
Uncertain play, in life each day
That's why I plea to you.

Friday, February 3, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kim Barney 03 March 2017

Congratulations on poem of the day!

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Denis Mair 03 March 2017

Hoping to live up to gifts bestowed by mother...Looking to mother as source of sustaining strength...Her thoughts are inborn in us...The filial gratitude in this poem broadens from one's own birth mother to the Mother Goddess of the Universe.

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 March 2017

Each day! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Christina Simmons 03 March 2017

These words on reading are interesting: giving the opportunity to reflect on one's own memories. It gives the illusion we have been led to believe we're too old for wishing comfort from our mother. Of course you're never regardless of age. Congratulation! ! !

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Chinedu Dike 03 March 2017

Highly relatable and well thought-out poem. Thanks for sharing Prakashsingh.

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Rajnish Manga 16 July 2017

A very sincere tribute to all mothers of the world. Thanks.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 03 March 2017

A glowing tribute to the greatest institution bestowed on ladies due to motherhood. Heartiest Congratulations on Poem of the Day.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 03 March 2017

A glowing tribute to the greatest institution bestowed on ladies due to motherhood.

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Ravi A 03 March 2017

I usually come across many poems under the theme but most of them are not with poesy. Your poem is different in this sense. Though a routine theme is handled, it is being handled with care and a poetic approach. Usually, people do not care about the economy of words but you are mindful of this. Very good.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 03 March 2017

Congrats, on your poem to be selected as the poem of the day

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Prakashsingh Rajput

Prakashsingh Rajput

Vijaypur, Karnataka, India
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