Mother`s Gift Poem by Vinod Kumar U K

Mother`s Gift

Rating: 5.0


</>Mother told me
I hold you in cool
even i am hot
I hold you in light
even in the dark
I hold you in dry
Even i was wet
I kept your eyes are open
Even i am blind
I kept you in peace
When I am struggling
I know your all
And i slowly lead you
The beautiful world
I sow the joys in your eyes
In the wonder rain and rainbow
The colourful autumn
The breeze and butterfly
The glimpses of shining grasses
The pearl spreading rocks
The dancing wheat field
The cooly moon nights
The bird`s wakeup songs
All are for you my beloved baby
enjoy the fragrance and fun
my dear darling baby

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fiona Davidson 03 December 2008

What a touching example of a mothers love for her child...thank you for sharing this....

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James Roberts 04 December 2008

WHAT A REALLY BEATTIFUL POEM i WISH MY MOTHER WAS ALIVE TO ENJOY IT JIM

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 07 December 2008

A mother a deputy of the God Is really a benediction on the world of clod. Good Work.

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Robert Melliard 11 December 2008

I especially liked the second half of this poem because it reminded me of the way my mother taught me to appreciate the beauty of nature. She was always pointing things out - flowers, birds, trees and so on. Best wishes, Robert.

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Ency Bearis 20 December 2008

a poignant poem..nice written..lovely..10 Ency Bearis

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Sandra Fowler 17 August 2009

The gift of a mother is her unconditional love. Naughty or good her baby is her darling. A poignant poem of love and remembrance. Warm regards, Sandra

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my dear darling baby.... inal the difficulties mother still addreses as dear. this is beauty and total dedication and love for child.... i like it...10 love papa series called... papa do u know and papa u too?

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Mittur Ramprasad 28 December 2008

veru touching natural acts of a mother to a child, haiku theme is good but not the structure should be Five Seven Five thank you for your comments about my poems, keep in touch

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Mamta Agarwal 23 December 2008

a lovely poem, very touching.God couldn't be every where so he made mothers. its honest, straight from your heart.10 Mamta

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Kesav Easwaran 23 December 2008

mother is the eye the heart the feel of the world around for babies...good write Vinod...10

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