** Mother To Be ** Poem by Mehraneh Hosseini
** Mother To Be **
They say you will go to heaven
If you have a bun in the oven
After passing one and seven
You would pass one month again
It's beyond all men's ken
Teetering on the brink
Not allowed to drink
Hardly sleeping a wink
Trying to be in the pink
If not, fall down and sink
Least said soonest mended
All things you have ever said
About how much you suffered
At first sight disappeared
The best thing since sliced bread
Promoting over everybody's head
That's why we have always heard
Being a mother is the best thing you have ever felt.
Just beautiful. Mothers deserve the best. All the best things in the world, if we give, won't make up for a moment of a mother's devoted attention to her child. Well done.
Krasivayi! Guezelim! Sehr schoen! Beautiful! Bella! La Jawab! Khoobsurat! Darun! of persian i think it is Behetarin though i am not sure but its close in vocabulary with indian hindi or pakistani urdu...the first stanza is satirical religious significance which demands th attraction of readers further on.The first stanza is like a Taqwa....one may well dislike its material reality of natural losses and gaining over another`s conditions but the lucid style has unravelled the mysteries what Islam has always overlooked beyond the concepts of islamisation and hard life of women in men`s defined social dos and donts and prejudices in Iran.Coming to the second stanza it delineates beautifully with the painstaking definition of how much courage it requires to be a mother in terms of sacrifices against materialism what women most of the time finds easy than men with men in enjoying plutocracy the wrong way or right or the mixed way.The last stanza is an analysis and signifies the contribution of motherhood to mankind and the aptitude of the poet to justify in the end saying the prototype to symbolize maternity and motherhood and therefore motherliness.Overall an enjoyable poetic theme again well rhymed and bodied, very precise and less time consuming for the lazy readers and hats off to all mothers who has a voice in your mouthpiece.Hallmarks
nice tender poem about a mother to be well written and exudes the confidence of creation.... blessings sat
this is really the best of your poems.very nice one in a good rhyme.thank you for this great poem.
Sense of maternity and motherhood with high pulse of kindness especially in our country with good background culture
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/5/2025 7:57:42 AM # 1.0.0
Great poem Mehraneh, 10/10 from me. keep up the great work :)