Saturday, August 19, 2023

Mourning The Giant Tree Comments

Rating: 5.0

The tree always waited for me
at the edge of every new morning
its thick branches of blue-green needles
hiding the mysteries of God's little creatures
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Susan Williams
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Bharati Nayak 23 August 2023

A heart warming as well as heart breaking story told in such a poetic language! The fir tree which grew with you and held memories of three generations was a symbol of love and care, was gone by some cruel act of careless teenagers and withit gone the lives and memories!

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Rebecca Navarre 22 August 2023

Way Beyond #ING! .. With Endless Endless Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 22 August 2023

Shadows And Memories However Will Always Be There Dear Susan As Your Heart And Spirit Will Be, , , Ever So Strong! ..

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Rebecca Navarre 22 August 2023

The Heartbreaking News Of Those Cruel Boys As You So Politely Put It! ..

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Rebecca Navarre 22 August 2023

Oh God How Deeply Heart Moving And Such Precious Sentiments All The Way Through Till.....

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Anjandev Roy 19 August 2023

Marvelous representation.....thank u, dear poetess.....

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 19 August 2023

Susan tomorrow will be mt birthday and it also when my mother died This made me think of her

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Dr Dillip K Swain 19 August 2023

This excellent poem finds its ground here: because my Father built a strong roof over it all by himself in the winter of his life....appreciated this prepossessing poem.

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