Mud Poem by Oliver Ovid

Mud

Rating: 3.2


I smeared it all
over my

genitals and
laughed like a

prepubescent
clown in heat

and the mud
warmed me.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I tripped and fell in a puddle one night
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
V P Mahur 25 March 2014

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Tanya Gupta 18 April 2014

its the nice one, enjoyed.

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Ramesh Rai 18 May 2014

what a beautiful expression. love it.

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Shania K. Younce 13 March 2014

It is a good poem. Bien!

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Dr Antony Theodore 19 October 2018

your notes on the poem makes it clear.... and the mud warmed me. very good expressions to explain the special feeling when you tripped and fell...... thank u dear poet. tony

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Bri Edwards 25 February 2018

, i've experienced the same thing(s) ...thanks for the Poet's Notes. to MyPoemList. maybe when i get REALLY senile i'll review it and smile. OH, I READ MY 8/30/2014 COMMENT, below. THAT must be what you referred to in the message i received from you today,2/25/2018! 'better late than never', i guess. bri :) i wonder if you've been away and shall now submit more poems. hmmm?

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Bri Edwards 30 August 2014

i thought i commented already! hmmmm? yeah, i'm sure i did. i guess you deleted the comment. it must have been too cool. bri :)

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 18 August 2014

Expression in the poem in little lines finds it beautiful.

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A raw and rabid river of revelation!

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