Multidimensional Love Notes Poem by F.K. Preston

Multidimensional Love Notes

Rating: 4.0


Every life is a pocket watch
owned by a man in Sixth-Street.
Every dream was once a star
burning up your dirty laundry.
Every secret we kept to ourselves
was spat out by God.
Every you, you seem to be
has a me waiting for you
in Istanbul, Denver, Saturn, and the sea.
I'll wait all my lives to fall in love
with my one and only
just up until infinity.

Multidimensional Love Notes
Monday, February 25, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: god,love,romance,universe
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 03 March 2019

The entire poem is multidimensional! Unique!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 25 February 2019

Wonderfully written poem....10+++++++++++++

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Bernard F. Asuncion 21 March 2019

Congrats for being chosen..........

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Edward Kofi Louis 21 March 2019

Muse, Peace and Love to all mankind without racism! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Prabir Gayen 21 March 2019

Beautiful poem dear poet thanks... congratulation....

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Sylvia Frances Chan 21 March 2020

Most deserviong poem! ToMyPoemList! This poem was chosen twice, last years same date. PLease keep on creating and submitting, dear poet! I cite your remarkable lines/words Every you, you seem to be has a me waiting for you in Istanbul, Denver, Saturn, and the sea.................So true! Thank you for sharing.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 21 March 2020

MULTIDIMENSIONAL LOVE NOTES is a truly excellent poem with tinge of surrealistic tone, but a brilliant verse, well conveyed and best presented. The picture added is true surrealistic and beautiful painting. I can tell you, since I am also a paintress. I like this poem very much. CONGRATULATIONS on being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day. Hooray! A 10 ++++++for the dashing poem.

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Mahtab Bangalee 21 March 2020

Every you, you seem to be has a me waiting for you in Istanbul, Denver, Saturn, and the sea. I'll wait all my lives to fall in love..............//// beautiful expression about multidimensional love; congrats

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Khairul Ahsan 21 March 2020

'Every you, you seem to be has a me waiting for you' - nice!

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Dominic Windram 21 March 2020

Excellent poem with a marked sense of the surreal...congratulations!

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