Murmurs Poem by Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Murmurs

Rating: 5.0


Darkness
that is kept awake
By the night's
Unceasing murmurs
of the wind in the leaves
And the silence
of the shooting stars,
Dozes off in the morning cool.
Sun who has her gold
scattered on the street
extends her fingers
to pick them up
From among the rushing waters.
Nobody pauses to look back.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 04 March 2022

This is a wonderful poem Unnikrishnan ji...loved it

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Unnikrishnan E S 11 March 2022

My rejoinders to Dilipji and Becca have vanished.. Truant PoemHunter!

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Rebecca Navarre 09 March 2022

This speaks with a beauty that i could not put into words! .. Awesome! ..+++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 09 March 2022

Oh, Wow! .. So beautifully beautifully painted! .. Awesome imagery and feel to this! .. Ever so marvelous! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++

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Unnikrishnan E S 11 March 2022

My heart goes to you, Becca, for the nice words

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Unnikrishnan E S 09 March 2022

Your words of appreciation are invaluable, Becca. Obliged, Dear Poet.

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Dr. M. Asim Nehal 06 March 2022

Smooth and rhythmic poetry. Full *****

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Unnikrishnan E S 07 March 2022

Dr Nehal, so obliged

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David Wood 05 March 2022

I get unceasing murmers at night, by the trains going by 50 metres away! !

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Unnikrishnan E S 05 March 2022

That could be quite disturbing… but I spoke about the murmurs from within.

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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