Manonton Dalan

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Music Mover - Poem by Manonton Dalan

burgundy beautiful dresses
choir singing 'power of love'
young kids; high pitch voices
must have long hours practices
i like beats with nice message
makes me think, i clap for praise

i took pictures of them for friend
whose kid is one of the singers
must have distracted, he waves
so slowly slide away, blend in
i listen and ponder about song
i clap, dance and i wasn't alone


Comments about Music Mover by Manonton Dalan

  • (5/15/2011 7:11:00 AM)


    i like this poem.Music makes our spirit feel free and not abandoned. (Report) Reply

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  • (5/14/2011 8:21:00 PM)


    Awesome work. Great sentiments with nice style.
    Great write indeed.
    I rate it 10.
    TFS.
    Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Please use search box if the page does open with the title of the poem.
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, May 14, 2011

Poem Edited: Monday, May 16, 2011


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