My Angel....! Poem by simran arora

My Angel....!

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A castle is a world of slave,
and may of me,

it gave me smile,
and snached it too, ..

That castles belonged to me and mine,
the love of me,
and its shine....

That castles cared for the angel of my heart,
made and teached me love,
and stud apart...

Even today i breath with her,
and wish to snatch it from time,
and keeping her into my hub...

That green angel made my life glow the same,
but now made me alone...
But her skys are overframed...

I am happy for her achivement of sky,
bt question why she ruind me,
and my flys...

That empty castle eat me,
and my presence,
too distroy me and my strength....

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
My mst beautiful angel flew away...
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hazel Durham 11 July 2013

Interesting poem dark and deep! ! Keep up the good work!

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Abhishek Mishra 07 July 2013

Heavy stuff...great work: -) keep it up..

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Simran Arora 07 July 2013

Thnx 4 cmnts nd motivation...

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Vishal Sharma 07 July 2013

poetic love a great reading sensation

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