Eindaray Kyaw

Rookie (8th Sep,1996 / Yangon)

My Audiences - Poem by Eindaray Kyaw

What I tried to pick up
The oldie pass-ports to 'Success'
With a burning desire to recollect;

Although I created easy-harmony
Among fellows of necessary;
Being got nowhere
Just supposed to be not fair!

Although I changed to pride myself
On everything they believe important;
Being gone wrong
Just supposed to be not crowned!

Although I'd like to lose my temper
Freely exploded into wild laughter;
Being a fruitless attempt
Just supposed to be so violent!

Finally, I decided to neglect all
With heavy sigh how to avoid flaw;
Again and again, being in vain
Still supposed to be shamed! ! !


Comments about My Audiences by Eindaray Kyaw

  • Stevie Taite (9/13/2012 11:24:00 AM)


    Older can only show you how to be yourself and Believe in yourself in matters such as this. An origional little write that just seems to work so well! (Report) Reply

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  • (8/26/2012 12:41:00 AM)


    Audiences are those that appreciate that you write for yourself first and that it is original and also pleases them. good write. Very astute and economical language. (Report) Reply

  • Aung Si (8/23/2012 11:14:00 PM)


    What kind of praising is worth u! Unquestionable poem! The style of this is fantastic and composing verses is marvelous, too.And when it is filled by essential rhymes, the only one I can say is perfect. (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh Rai (8/21/2012 11:21:00 PM)


    Finally, I decided to neglect all
    With heavy sigh how to avoid flaw;
    Again and again, being in vain
    Still supposed to be shamed! ! !
    failures again and again should not be the cause for being shamed
    but confession of failure yields high moral value. a nice poem.I like it. keep writing.
    (Report) Reply

  • Philo Yan (8/21/2012 8:21:00 PM)


    Finding one's true self can take an instant or a lifetime. But when we forgive ourselves and move forward, eventually our true self will find us. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, August 21, 2012



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