My Blue Valentine Poem by Marvin Brato Sr

My Blue Valentine

Rating: 5.0


A happy Valentines day,
Isn't it supposed to be?
A moment to celebrate,
A date sublime as fate.

But why I am alone,
Are you not forlorn?
I remain sitting here,
Waiting for you dear.

Same time as last year,
Happiness we both share.
Your warm hug and kiss,
Are your marks I most miss.

But you did not come
Why my love, are we done?
All the dreams and love I bear,
Are gone now as you did not care

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 13 February 2009

Marvin, this pensive little poem beautifully expresses the disappointment of jilted love. Your title is perfect. Your poem truly saddens. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Catrina Heart 06 February 2009

beautiful and poignant poem written in nice rhyming...10+

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Marvin Brato Sr

Marvin Brato Sr

Davao City, Philippines
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