My Boeing Poem by Ellias Anderson Jr.

My Boeing



Fly, fly, and go higher
Break the edge of this prison with your power

You are powerful, you are big
Everybody will love you a day, he he he, even the pigs

A dreamy fly with 747
You will be with it again, oh, rhymes come, AHAN! Even and even!

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
He he he, i love Aircraft the most
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 28 March 2014

he-y ellias, even though he and hee sound alike, i believe the proper spelling is hee when you are trying to indicate laughter. let me look that up; i know i looked it up once before. hee-hee English Interjection hee-hee (onomatopoeia) An expression of laughter Related terms hee ha haha ====================== BUT I ALSO FOUND THIS: he [3] interj an expression of amusement or derision, (Also) he-he! , hee-hee! SO BOTH ARE CORRECT! he-he AND hee-hee BUT I SEE THAT IT IS APPARENTLY CORRECT TO USE A HYPHEN MARK [-] BETWEEN HE AND HE OR HEE AND HEE. ================================ You are powerful, you are big Everybody will love you a day, he he he, even the pigs i would suggest for the second line: Everybody will love you one day, he-he-he, even the pig. i don't think you need the s on pigs, unless you REALLY want it. - - - - - - - - - - - - - A dreamy fly with 747 You will be with it again, oh, rhymes come, AHAN! Even and even! i think i understand that you were struggling to find a rhyme for 747. you made a nice effort! but, even though seven has an ending spelled the same as even, they don't sound exactly the same to me, an every-day-english-speaker. in the word even the first e has a long-e sound like in the word he or she, there IS a person's first name Evan which would, for me, rhyme better with seven. i applaud you for your efforts with the english language! [i don't know what AHAN is.] thanks for shariing. i looked for the skunk poem, part one, and don't find it. can you help me find it or copy and paste it to me please? ? ? thanks. and thanks for sharing your love for airplanes. bri :)

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