My Breath Poem by indira babbellapati
My Breath
the winds breathe
with a sweep
the ocean and coulds breathe
with a roar
then breathes the rain
with a tip-tap
the fire breathes
crackling silence
the space breathes
with an echo
the sweep
the roar
the tip-tap
the fumes
the space
expand the universal energy
connecting every breath
i absorb all these
that my body breathes
in silence and peace
25oct2009
09.34hrs
interesting.. i like my interpretation of the piece..it represents vigor.
we breath..........my breath is silent............we breath for one another in life...........
everything breathes...we breathe the same thing....the living....
The breath of life, all has its breath! very descriptive and imaginative penning! Lovely; D
WoW...Mindblowing composition projecting the unison of cosmic breath and human breath. Each one of your poems demystifys some fragment of this cosmos. Good Work Professor.
'Expand the universal energy connecting every breath' Rachel Ann Butler
You brought it all together with your breath in a creative and skillful way. You connect us all to the life force so well. 10 Karin
a breath is all that it was, and a breath is what it shall ever be! loved the poem ma'am. thank you.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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