Saturday, October 24, 2009

My Breath Comments

Rating: 4.9

the winds breathe
with a sweep

the ocean and coulds breathe
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indira babbellapati
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The breath of life, all has its breath! very descriptive and imaginative penning! Lovely; D

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Ranjit Ravindran 05 November 2009

WoW...Mindblowing composition projecting the unison of cosmic breath and human breath. Each one of your poems demystifys some fragment of this cosmos. Good Work Professor.

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Rachel Butler 31 October 2009

'Expand the universal energy connecting every breath' Rachel Ann Butler

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You brought it all together with your breath in a creative and skillful way. You connect us all to the life force so well. 10 Karin

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 30 October 2009

a breath is all that it was, and a breath is what it shall ever be! loved the poem ma'am. thank you.

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Sonya Florentino 28 October 2009

everything breathes...we breathe the same thing....the living....

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rago rago 26 October 2009

we breath..........my breath is silent............we breath for one another in life...........

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Rakesh Bedi 25 October 2009

.... may everyone breathe in peace n silence......

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interesting.. i like my interpretation of the piece..it represents vigor.

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 24 October 2009

man seems the quietest...

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indira babbellapati

indira babbellapati

visakhapatnam, india
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