My Broken Hare Pert 1 Comments
A broken heart is hard to explain
it's hard to explain the agonizing pain
the pain that just cut so deep
it's like a shivering creep up your back
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A very touching poem recited in a deeply sadden manner. It made me want to cry together with the poet. Brilliantly descriptive and emotional. Congrat! ! !
Dear Mercedes, I see potential and raw power in this poem with the simile of the shivering creep and the repetition of the c sound in cut, creep, and crack. Wishing you all the best in your life and poetry journey, Glen Kappy
an emotional poem of feelings that physically hurt? .........well penned
A broken heart is only understood by another broken heart. A touching poem, congratulations for being selected as members poem of the day.
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3/11/2026 7:21:29 PM # 1.0.0
Shivering creep..... such a tearjerker..... congrats on being chosen... a highest 10+++++