My Broken Hare Pert 1 Poem by mercedes abrahamson
My Broken Hare Pert 1
A broken heart is hard to explain
it's hard to explain the agonizing pain
the pain that just cut so deep
it's like a shivering creep up your back
it's a code that many people can not crack
here is my broken heart
here is the way it has fallen apart
here is the way my broken heart feels
the way that it never heals
I give you
my broken heart
Shivering creep..... such a tearjerker..... congrats on being chosen... a highest 10+++++
A very touching poem recited in a deeply sadden manner. It made me want to cry together with the poet. Brilliantly descriptive and emotional. Congrat! ! !
Dear Mercedes, I see potential and raw power in this poem with the simile of the shivering creep and the repetition of the c sound in cut, creep, and crack. Wishing you all the best in your life and poetry journey, Glen Kappy
an emotional poem of feelings that physically hurt? .........well penned
A broken heart is only understood by another broken heart. A touching poem, congratulations for being selected as members poem of the day.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/2/2024 4:16:42 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Is hard to explain! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.