My Chamber Is Empty Poem by Savita Tyagi

My Chamber Is Empty

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Give me back my dreams
Even if it spells nightmare.

Give me back my aspirations
Even if all ends in failure.

Give me back my youth
Even if it meant struggle.

Give me back that passion of love
Even though it causes heartache.

Or if you wish to take it all and
Declare that nothing is mine,

At least give me the faith to fill my
Empty chamber with your music.

Saturday, July 22, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: faith
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Muhammad Ali 29 July 2017

beautiful, and whether it is the faith that the poem becomes a prayer or it is the resistance to the faith. let's play again or no, let me play again, poem reflects the urge to live, love and live.

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Savita Tyagi 30 July 2017

Thank you so much Muhammad Ali for your appreciative words.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 July 2017

At least give me the faith to fill my Empty chamber with your music..., insightful theme. Beautiful poem on faith having nice inscription. Thanks for sharing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 July 2017

At least give me the faith to fill my Empty chamber with your music.... insightful theme. A touching write on faith, love and prayer. Thanks.

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Valsa George 23 July 2017

Such a beautiful prayer! If we get the faith and humility to accept whatever is sent to us from above, e will never feel dejected!

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Savita Tyagi 23 July 2017

Thank you Valsa for reinforcing my thoughts. Faith is what carries us.

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Aakash Nengroo 22 July 2017

Aaah! ...a nice poem indeed... Penned indeed with faith

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Savita Tyagi 22 July 2017

Thank you Aakash. Glad you liked the poem.

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