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My Childhood

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i want to go back to my childhood

where my father was my only hero

the best caress belonged to my mother

my only apogee acme was shoulders of my father

my only enemies were my brothers and sisters

and my only pain was my injured knee
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Monday, June 2, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: childhood
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Yes Amir, no matter how tough and difficult a childhood has been, we will always remember it as the best part of our life. Great poem, very eloquently composed. Ingeborg von Finsterwalde

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Sarah Ali 07 October 2016

i love it....absolutely amazing

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A comparative poem distinguishing the childhood and adulthood.Loved reading the poem

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Kelly Kurt 02 April 2015

Childhood was much more simple Nice poem, Amir Peace

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Walterrean Salley 11 September 2014

I can identify with you. Revisiting my childhoods a favorite pastime. It gives such joy an assurance, especially in these times. A peaceful, nostalgic poem.

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F J Thomas 11 June 2014

Though I do not miss my childhood Amir, I still feel the longing in this writing. Beautifully expressed :)

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Valsa George 11 June 2014

and my only pain was my injured knee not a broken heart like these days........... So very true! I love these lines! A very realistic picture you have drawn of your childhood... Childhood is a time when we often cry over our injured limbs... Then we never knew the aches of an wounded heart! It was a time when when we had no enemies, but the sibling jealousy made us see our brothers and sisters as rivals...! You have an innate flair for writing... With practise, you can grow into a real promise... Best of luck Amir!

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Ramesh Rai 07 June 2014

childhood is the beautiful days of life which will never b back.A beautiful poem

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Ramesh Rai 07 June 2014

childhood is the beautiful days of life which will never b back.A beautiful poem

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Musfiq Us Shaleheen 07 June 2014

Your feelings are so good. try to develop your metaphor and keep writing. you have real poetic nature. day by day it will be better.. keep penning and ponder my dear bro Amir Mohammad...

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