My Childhood Poem by amir mohammad islami chalandar
My Childhood
i want to go back to my childhood
where my father was my only hero
the best caress belonged to my mother
my only apogee acme was shoulders of my father
my only enemies were my brothers and sisters
and my only pain was my injured knee
not a broken heart like these days
i used to play simple sports like soccer
with my sincere and sinless friends
but now we must play quack and fake roles
for our new tartufe and pharisee casual ones.
Your poem expresses feelings and it is good. You could try to rhyme your poems with a kind of rhythm. Keep writing, you are on your way to writing great poems.
Your feelings are so good. try to develop your metaphor and keep writing. you have real poetic nature. day by day it will be better.. keep penning and ponder my dear bro Amir Mohammad...
childhood is the beautiful days of life which will never b back.A beautiful poem
Yes Amir, no matter how tough and difficult a childhood has been, we will always remember it as the best part of our life. Great poem, very eloquently composed. Ingeborg von Finsterwalde
A comparative poem distinguishing the childhood and adulthood.Loved reading the poem
I can identify with you. Revisiting my childhoods a favorite pastime. It gives such joy an assurance, especially in these times. A peaceful, nostalgic poem.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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I life the theme of this poem. The sad truth when we lose our childhood.