all of my verbs were past! !
past perfect, simple past,
i am feeling the gloom
i seek for simple present! ! ! ! !
Present is all that counts. Nicely said in a short and sweet verse. Thank you.
Lovely idea to believe in today but in the light of past and a determination for future. Keep writing I liked it.
I really enjoyed this
Perfetto il mio amico
Beautiful use of metaphor and Hope for simple present. Good write.
Lo! present is ephemeral future is the shadow of past
a few words well spoken we all seek for simple present nice writing
It is mental status
That always forces
To loose trust
And train behind with no trace
Make present beautiful
Try always to be successful
This shall add fragrance
Life may be revived at once
We are to present ourselves
And simply face
The condition prevalent
And never look absent
quite an interesting poem, but better to forge on ahead and just forget the past
excellent! So effective with concise and meaningful words. Thank you so much for your comment for me as a poet. Appreciate it very much.
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