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all of my verbs were past! !

past perfect, simple past,

i am feeling the gloom

i seek for simple present! ! ! ! !

Thursday, June 5, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: hope
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Aftab Alam Khursheed 06 July 2014

Lo! present is ephemeral future is the shadow of past

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Heather Wilkins 29 June 2014

a few words well spoken we all seek for simple present nice writing

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nice poem......10 It is mental status That always forces To loose trust And train behind with no trace Make present beautiful Try always to be successful This shall add fragrance Life may be revived at once We are to present ourselves And simply face The condition prevalent And never look absent

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Jesus Diaz Llorico 08 June 2014

quite an interesting poem, but better to forge on ahead and just forget the past

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Savita Tyagi 07 June 2014

excellent! So effective with concise and meaningful words. Thank you so much for your comment for me as a poet. Appreciate it very much.

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Present is all that counts. Nicely said in a short and sweet verse. Thank you.

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Akhtar Jawad 06 June 2014

Lovely idea to believe in today but in the light of past and a determination for future. Keep writing I liked it.

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Akhtar Jawad 06 June 2014

Lovely idea to believe in today but in the light of past and a determination for future. Keep writing I liked it.

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 06 June 2014

Perfect writing. I really enjoyed this Perfetto il mio amico

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Mihaela Pirjol 06 June 2014

Beautiful use of metaphor and Hope for simple present. Good write.

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